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 Punkins plays with her friends on a small stone-paved space at {{coords|-166|-75}}. She and her two mates, {{CharLink|Cinnamon}} and {{CharLink|Slow-Butt}}, are standing near [[Golbraith's Cellar|Golbraith's Home]]. She is pretending to be a [[Steel Watcher]] scanning Cinnamon and Slow-Butt, to check their 'records'.
-If talked to, Punkins tries to copy the automaton behavior, addressing to the party members as "citizen" and imitating mechanical buzzes and sounds.
+If spoken to, Punkins tries to copy the automaton behavior, addressing party members as "citizen", imitating mechanical buzzes and sounds.
-The party may then take part in children's game, agreeing or declining to be scanned. If they spoke to Cinnamon first and detected candy in her pocket, they may also rat the girl out to the "steel watcher", thus allaying suspicions from themselves.
+The party may then take part in children's game, agreeing or declining to be scanned. If Cinnamon is spoken with first and candy is detected in her pocket, they may rat the girl out to the "steel watcher", allaying suspicions from themselves.
 Either option earns minor approval from {{CharLink|Karlach}}, {{CharLink|Jaheira}}, {{CharLink|Gale}}, {{CharLink|Wyll}}, {{CharLink|Minsc}} and {{CharLink|Halsin}}.