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Manuscript contains Nansi Gretta's notes on an adventure story draft.
This book is redolent with the enticing smell of paper and ink.
Properties
Books
Rarity: Common
Weight: 0.5 kg / 1 lb
Price: 14 gp
Where to find
- Sold by Nansi Gretta
Text
[This book, the completed manuscript of an adventure story in draft, is covered with notes in Nansi's hand. A few red-inked phrases stand out amid the chaos.]
This isn't landing.
I don't buy it.
Doesn't ring true.
Did you mean to do it like this?
Could do with another pass.
Hah!
Get rid of whatever this is.
Good flow.
All right, I buy it.
Seriously?
Ah... like this? No.
It will be good. But it's not there yet.